Well I was going to post this over on the 'er BB, but despite all the help people (janklow) offered, I could never get my APS pdf files to poof into an uploadable format. So I’m gonna post 'a couple here and link 'em; that way EVERYBODY can flame these outlines that I’ve been fiddling with.
Looking for feedback from the design experts here, so feel free to give opinions, advice, suggestions, etc., but bear in mind that I’m not a shaper. I do have the good sense to defer to my local shaper on the final word. So there.
Here goes…